SirVivi

[sirvivi]

Sir Vivi was once just a humble black mage, he used black magic like all the other black mages, but he took a threat that would have destroyed the world, and suceeded, which was how he got his title, "Sir Vivi". along his journey, Sir Vivi became a master of the black magics, along with many other different traits. His magic prowess exceeds most, but he still has alot to learn. ( this is not the exact same vivi from ff9, so dont get all pissed that this doesnt fit vivi's real resumé)

[Luna]

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x33 Wow, you picked my favorite character from Final Fantasy. ^^

But, there are a few things wrong with it.

I don't want anything that makes a character seem better than others.

I have a problem with this part: "His magic prowess exceeds most" because of the above reason. However, everything else is good, and if you just change that to "His magic powers are good" or something along those lines, then I'll accept your character. =3
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[Luna]

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>> Now I realize that's only one thing wrong with it. But oh well. ^^;;
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